Opinion on this letter.. feel free to give me advice and correct my grammar =)

Question

I didn't write longer just because I hate to sound pessimistic...

I quit my job.. I was working a lot and I got very sick... and the worse MXXX got sick as well... I was also treating to give positive results from test.... My face was paralyze for almost a month, it was freighting experience....

Right now I am feeling very disappointed about this country.. it seems like the people are so concentrated in making money that make them act like cannibals.

MXXX is starting to talk a lot.. I always call him "hermoso" and now he is starting to reply "tu hermosa" he is a very sweet kid.

RIght now I dont know what the future holds, I am kind of taking a break from thinking and making plans, I am soo tired...

I will for sure write to you when things change and I feel more passionate about my future.

I am glad you are feeling good and thankful... what type of work are your looking for?

Regarding these profound realization you are trying to find.... is there anything special you are doing to find them....I am reading this book about the journey of a magician, is very interesting in teaches you ritual and a very different way of looking at this world.... although as you can see I haven't learn my lessons =)

As always, you are missed.

XOXO

Answer 1

I don't understand your question.  Do this again in the form of a question.  This is a site where we give our own opinions for questions asked.  I hope you get well soon and also find a job.  You will find that there are many good people in the USA, so don't give up, okay?  I am a retired schoolteacer and a pastor's wife.  I enjoy helping other people.  I have been so blessed in my lifetime.  Grams

Answer 2

I quit my job. I was working a lot before I got really sick. To make it worse, MXXX got sick as well. I was also hoping to get positive results from my test (I'm not sure what you wanted to say here). My face was paralyzed for almost a month, it was a frightening experience!!

Right now, I am feeling very disappointed about this country. It seems like the people are so concentrated in making money that they'll act like cannibals.

MXXX is starting to talk a lot. I always call him "hermoso"! Now, he's starting to reply "tu hermosa". He is very sweet.

Right now, I don't know what the future holds. I am kind of taking a break from thinking and making plans. I am so tired!

I will surely write you when things change and I feel more passionate about my future. I am glad you are feeling good and thankful. What type of work are you looking for?

Regrading these profound realizations you are trying to find: is t here anything special you are doing to find them? I am reading this book about the journey of a magician. It is very interesting and teaches you rituals and different ways of looking at the world.

Although, as you can see, I haven't learned my lessons.

=)

As always, you are missed.

XOXO.

--Hope that helps. You may want to put this in books and authors to get better results.