Opinions on my poem plz?

Question

Player

Your games they hurt

There completly absurd

You lie and manipulate

To get some on your plate

She lies there in your arms

Thinking your doing no harm

That your words are for real

Truthfully of how you feel

You lie your way through

With her not having a clue

She wakes up to find

How she was so blind

Those words were fake

Deadly, like a rattle snake

Innocent girl, believed in love

Saw this boy and put him above

Thought he was the one, her one to be

Turned out to be, as fake as you can see

She walked on out of his lying ways

And found herself in a world of amaze

Answer 1

i think its good. i like it. :D

Answer 2

WHOA.

dude did you seriously write that?!

THAT'S AN AWESOME POEM O:

wow..

im amazed!

that's like super good!

wow.

you should submit it to the newspaper who knows! Maybe they will publsih it if you want !

Other that that

ITS AWESOME!

Answer 3

"Hi!"

It's a great poem that a lot of young people can relate too.

You did a great job on this poem.

Well Done!  : )