Opinions on my story (by an eleven-year-old)?

Question

Please give comments, ratings, suggestions, parts that you liked/disliked, etc. Anything would be really appreciated. Its only the first three chapters though and I need a ton of editing done. Thanks and enjoy! http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2545686/1/Secrets_Revealed_from_the_Shadows

Answer 1

Good. It shows real promise.

Spelling, spelling spelling!

All of your errors were very distracting.

Write, edit, revise and repeat, baby.

Answer 2

thats pretty good for an 11 year old. im proud :)