Opinions on my story please? ?

Question

I'm writing a story, and I just want some opinions from people who enjoy science fictiony type stuff. Here I wrote a summery.

Lexi's just an average teenager, Drew is a scientist living sixty years in the future. Lexi has average family problems, Drew has the fate of the human race in his hands. Lexi's desperately trying to survive volunteering at kids camp, Drew is desperately working toward saving the world from his invention that went wrong. But when a device of Drew's brings Lexi to the future, the two of them become necessary in each others different lives to save the world from destruction. Lexi must stop Drew from inventing The Mistake ten years earlier, but there's one problem.

Lexi is stuck in the future.

Opinions please! I also need a title for it. I'm barely thirteen so if it sounds really stupid don't be mean about it.

Answer 1

For a barely thirteen year old, you're more articulate than some of the junk I've read here on these pages.

You've got a good hook.  Keep going and I would love to read your story when you're done.

Title?

How about Continuum or Clock?

Some one word description at refers to time.

Answer 2

It sounds like a good story , no it's not stupid. Sorry i couldn't come up with any title for it.

Answer 3

It sounds really good! I write stories too. Answer mine please? http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?...

Answer 4

wow i read the summary thinking it was a big time adult author writing it but then i read your 13 you got great talent hmm title...

lexi and the invention of destruction hah idk im stupid :D

Answer 5

How about... The Time-walker?

You should really write the book first, then think up a title. It will come to you easier that way.

Answer 6

thats a nice idea

Answer 7

It doesn't sound stupid, it actually sounds really cool. Keep going, sorry can't think of a name though. :)

Answer 8

Sounds good! As a sci-fi/time travel writer myself, I know what you will be going through. Time travel is a complex topic. Hope you can pull it off! Not sure about the title. It will come to you though. Good luck.

Answer 9

Well to me its pretty good i would give it a 6.5/10