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Opinions on this poem?

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The delicacy of life, like a portrait of fears

stow deeper into the glorious road that follows

sublime warfare raging in between worlds

Look, there is belief among the feeders

it started before I knew

This life like a line, sometimes it's lost

Just as long as you hold it time will nurture you

I am my own prisoner

Every breath is a burdence,

its like forcing I love you's

The stories only as old as it's teller

I can only take myself so far

This experience is of the reaching

Where did I go?

It's very jolty, so I will create more flow. But I wrote it the first time I did LSD, and I havent changed any of it.

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  1. yo. dats glorious.


  2. Yeah it's starts out smooth and gets kinda rocky at the end...and try writing without LSD...maybe you'll be able to complete your thoughts better...
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