Opinions please for a short poem I wrote!!?

Question

Please try very hard not to believe me

This writing simply is to be

The epitaph of our epitome

and request to please not forget me.

I would step out of a reflection,

no intention or direction,

joy invading like infection,

no control of our defection,

please no waiting, waiting:

just abandon your recollection.

Answer 1

i like it

sounds like u need to go preach it in a coffee house somewhere

=)

Answer 2

I found it pretty cool. Very intellectual. My favorite part is the contradiction of joy and infection! Keep writing.

Answer 3

u must hate ur self

but u get five stars

a real poet hates they self some where along the line

Answer 4

it screams "I'm really fake"

don't believe what i say

i don't say what i mean

that this is the stereotypical end

and i'm asking you to not forget me

I look at myself

I don't know where to go or what do

I'm like depressed

cuz we can't control what we give up

so don't wait

just fo-get 'bout it.

Answer 5

its cute

Answer 6

I like it but it isn't something verry good.