PLEASE ANYBODY I NEED HELP?

Question

OKAY SO IM WRITING AN ESSAY TO A HIGH SCHOOL OF WHY I WANT TO GO THERE BUT I DONT KNOW HOW TO START OFF THE PARAGRAPH PLEASE I NEED HELP

Answer 1

i have thought about many schools to go to for this coming up year, but one stood out above the rest.  something like that.  

Answer 2

Well, think about it. Doesn't your future mean a lot to you?

You want to go to high school because you know that your education will help to carry you and support your future.

Answer 3

you can start off my telling something compelling about yourself. o

Answer 4

just think of why you want go go there and what you would wanna accomplish

Answer 5

Im very interested in attending your school this year for a few reasons.

Answer 6

Start off with something unique about yourself - something that they will remember you by.

Answer 7

Start off with an Attention getting opener! I believe that the begining sentences of your intro should begin with what makes the school stand out, ASB, BAND, Teachers, etc.. then write your thesis statemeent on why that is the high school you have chosen amongst the other schools.

I hope this helped.

Answer 8

i feel im a good applicant for this high school because...

Answer 9

             I have set many goals throughout my life that I have alwafull filld to fullfill sooner or later.  There has always been maintaining a healthy lifestyle , phyically and mentally, and being faithful to my beliefs as well as keeping a close relationship with friends and family. However, one of the most important goals I have established is that I have always wanted to recieve a wonderful education and use that knowledge to carry out my future career. Therefore, in my heart and mind , I feel that attending your school will help me to reach this ultimate goal that I have created.

Idk you can mold this however you want or not even use it at all. Its just a thought...

Answer 10

Well why do you want to go there?

Answer 11

my name is...

or

idk

Answer 12

Find out what the school motto is:  IE:  We eat red lizards for lunch.

Begin with this sentance;

As I continue to grow I know how important the decsion of where to attend school is.   I want to be part of a school who believes that  "We eat red lizards for lunch"....

Answer 13

First of all, research alll of the schools sports, extra curicullars, clubs...if u are interested mention any of those....say why u chose that one...be honest....have perfect punctuation.....I want to go to UPEI this is what i am suppose to write (begginning)

After researching the University of Prince Edward Island I love three main things about the school. Academics, Athletics, and the Clubs are these three groups.

after explain why you like them....if it shows that u researched the school, and want to go there for more than just the academics then ur a well rounded and took effort to want to know more about the schoool

Answer 14

U want to go there because u want to get a good life!

Answer 15

You could do the classic "What I'm most looking forward to at high school is..."

Or make it more interesting such as "New friends, more subject choice, freedom; all things i'm excited about as I approach high school."

Maybe the second is a bit ambitions..  

Answer 16

Start off saying what a great opportunity it would be to attend the school, state your thesis (I would enjoy attending ________ High School because...) and give reasons why, having each reason start off a paragraph.

Good luck!

Answer 17

I am interested in attending ---high school because.....then describe why you want to attend the High School. First paragraph should be at least 3 to 4 sentences.  

or ....something like....

Selecting a high school was an exciting and rigorous task, and I found that --- high school fulfills all of my needs. The team sports at --- high school provide an excellent match for my abilities and interests, and I feel that I would be an asset to the high school. After hearing the high recommendations from many of your alumni and my friends, reading the information materials on scholastic achievements, and visiting the school campus, I concluded that --- high school offers opportunities to contribute in various ways with my unique talents, and provides the experience that I hope to gain from my high school.

Next, write about the contributions, or values you will bring to the High school, areas that make you different from everyone else, or like most of the students who attend, such as  Academics, Service to community, Leadership., special interests, history of your family of attending the high school,etc...  

Remember the most important message is about you and the high school two-way relationship. Write in your own words. Start by making a list of all the reason you want to go there, and all your skills, talents and interests that you will enjoy and contribute during your high school years.

Answer 18

Start with: The.....

Answer 19

Ever since I was a little girl I have wanted to go to..... high school. I used to walk by the school and see all the students come out the door and I'd think "there I am."

Answer 20

dear high school, your mostly liely gonna accept me because you just want my money...so im leaving the rest blank

                                                      sincerly , you

Answer 21

To a high school?  That is odd,

Just start by saying I have been researching schools and I am very interested in (name of school).  The academic programs offered are excellent as well as the extra curricular activities.  

Answer 22

Attending High School has always been something that I have looked forward to, however, I believe that going to "Name of School" will benefit the rest of my life.  

Continue with how you heard of it, what you think of it, and what your goals are and how you plan to use the resources the school has to offer to benefit your future.

Answer 23

* Don't capitalize every letter.

* Avoid run-on sentences.

* Punctuation is your friend.

Good luck!

Answer 24

start with "I know your school is very good because (tell them some achievements they got before)

Answer 25

I would start with something like...

I am interested in attending (name of high school) this upcoming school year.

Then go on to tell why you want to go to that school. (academics, athletics, music dept. etc.)

Then tell why them why they would want you as a student. Sell yourself!!!

Good luck!

Answer 26

Why DO you want to go there? Be sure to not start off with "I" or "I want to go..." Start off with some kind of creative sentence.

"Everyone has different education goals, mine are_______. I believe that your school will help me to accomplish my educational and career goals."

(mine's not that creative, just giving you an idea)

Good luck :)

Answer 27

to whom it may concern....my name is ......and ........

Answer 28

i would start by saying something about how important high school is and what is leads to later in life. for example:

high school is a road, that is going to take me far in life, it will lead me to college, and eventually lead me to a life long carrer