PLEASE HELP MY AUNTS WEDDiNG IS TOMORROW AND I DIDN'T EVEN FINISH PREPARING MY SPEECH?!

Question

here is my speech, please add more stuff to it. and fix anything that is not correct. thanks! =]

Hi my name is michelle, and my dear aunt has offered me the honor of preparing a speech for this,

her very wonderful wedding day. First, thank you all for coming to celebrate with our family. I love

my aunt and have spent many wonderful times with her. I have

dedicated a poem for the couple and i will read it now.

i hope you all will enjoy it.

Heaven sent

Love ruled the day when the angels came to meet

sweeping them up and off of their feet

neither of them knowing what the future would bring

two hearts together and one diamond ring

today it's a promise, so sweet and so pure

together forever, for love shall endure

with the angels still near and dear to the hearts

this couple shall prosper and never grow apart

for its not always the eye that is the first to see

what really matters in life an what is meant to be

so remember that to love is time well spent

and what brought you two together was heaven sent.

i know about the punctuation, i am just in a hurry.

please add more lines to it. thanks!

Answer 1

its great :)

Answer 2

i think that this is really good!!! you might not want to add anymore. you dont want to be too longwinded. keep it nice and sweet. i think that this poem is very well written and i know that many ppl will come up to you to tell you just how wonderful it was.as they should!

instead of saying "offered" in the beginning,maybe you should say given. it just sounds a lil better  :]

good luck with the speech and congrats to your aunt

Answer 3

Good one, any way congs.

Answer 4

The only thing that I would add is in the opening to mention that you welcome (what ever your Aunts husband's name is) to the family.

Answer 5

I agree with Paula P