I am writing a cause essay (later on will be an effects essay) on the causes for dropping out of college. I have NEVER been good with writing a thesis statement, and this is what I have come up with... can some one please tell me what they think, and if you know how to fix it... let me know!! Thank you sooo much!
"College may seem to be the best idea for any graduating high school senior; however, once they begin their high school career some students experience obstacles that lead to them having to drop out."
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