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Question

Perfect Bliss

What comes out of the ocean blue?

Witch Contain Pieces of me and you?

Is It shellfish of purple daze?

that makes me stare and keeps me amaze?

Or is it the sun that shines above the sea?

witch shows refections of you and me?

what ever it can be just take me away to a perfect bliss

where lovers treat they self to a sunflower kiss

make me dizzy twirl me around

havent you notice i wanna love you down?

lover lets drive to an clean crisp world of fun

where runaway lovers come and secret lovers run

what ever it can be just take me away to a perfect bliss

where the world goes round and theres nothing we will miss

Answer 1

Really nice imagery.

It gives a almost 'sea sick', butterflies in the stomach feeling (a good feel).

My favorite line

"where runaway lovers come and secret lovers run"

Maybe, just 'Bliss' would be an apt title...

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