PLZ, Can You Rate my Yu-Gi-Oh Deck!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

Question

Can you rate my deck? I want the number of cards in it to be 40, but I have 58 in it. What cards should I remove and what should I add?

Monsters: 31

Blue Eyes White Dragon

Charcoal Inpachi

D.D. Trainer

Gemini Elf

Luster Dragon #2

Millennium Shield

Summoned Skull

Ancient Gear Golem

Anteatereatingant

Beserk Dragon

Breaker the Magical Warrior

Cyber Dragon X3

Cyber Jar

Dandylion

Dark Magician of Chaos

Des Volstgalph

Giant Germ X3

Horus the Black Flame Dragon LV 4

Horus the Black Flame Dragon LV 6

Horus the Black Flame Dragon LV 8

Jinzo

Magician of Faith

Mask of Darkness

Reflect Bounder

Slate Warrior

Spirit Reaper

Tyrant Dragon

Spells: 13

A Deal With Dark Ruler

Dark Hole

Heavy Storm

Last Will

Metamorphesis

Monster Reincarnation

My Body as a Shield

Mystical Space Tyhoon

Nobleman of Crossout

Pot of Avarice

Pot of Greed

Premature Burial

Scapegoat

Call of the Haunted

Ceasefire

Crush Card Virus

Divine Wrath

Judgement of Anubis

Magical Cylinder

Magic Jammer

Metal Reflect Slime

Michizure

Nightmare Wheel

Ordeal of a Traveler

Sakuretsu Armor

Seven Tools of the Bandit

Windstorm of Etaqua

Fusion Deck: 8

Cyber Twin Dragon

Fiend Skull Dragon

Gatling Dragon

Meteor B. Dragon

Ojama King

Reaper of the Nightmare X2

Thousand-Eyes Restrict

CAN YOU PLEASE RATE AND TELL ME WHAT TO REMOVE OR ADD?

I know that some of the cards are forbidden, but don't put that as an answer okay?

Answer 1

5/10

Answer 2

What kind of deck is it?? I can't tell u anything until I know the strategy and kind the deck it is.

Answer 3

id pick a type and work from there, u seem to be all over the place and some of ur cards or banned and u cant even use them in tournements. honestly ur best bet is to pick a type and work your way, maybe a dragon deck, good for beating down ur opponent and forcing ur opponent to play the defensive, or a LV deck, always keeps your opponenet on edge, especially with horus the black flame dragon LV 6 and LV 8 both beautiful cards. always helps to add a jinzo in there, a jinzo and horus lv 6 or 8 on the field is fatal :P