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PLZ! Can u read this and tell me wat u think? a short tragical story?

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The voice said "Walk along with me to a place where you will see the greatest scene, cant be forgotten because of its eternal beauty…Have you ever felt joy?" She said "No, but I'm willing to."

"Then come with me, I will lead you, it’s a little bit far away, needs time and some effort, but you will see some nice things through our journey."

She followed him, fell to the ground for the first time, "Stand up, I'm with you." Presumed confidently, feeling him beside her…

She fell another time, yet again, injured herself, a cut on her wrist…Again and broke a leg, a bruised hand bled…"I'm hurt, where are the nice scenes? I didn’t see any yet, didn’t feel joy!"

Losing blood and feeling numb, passing out because of the lack of blood flowing through her veins, feeding the will and forgetting the emotions. Every break down is increasing the pain, and with a hopeless voice lying to her self, "I know I'm stronger, but I'm not feeling anything."

"Go on..."

"It's getting darker, where are we…

I can't see, my vision is blurring, and I don’t know where I should go."

"You know it, just continue."

"I don’t see anything, or any path, I keep falling down…

I'm losing my sight, I haven’t seen anything from what you promised, and I only felt pain and agony."

She is suffering more, collapsing down...And then stopped…

"Why did you stop?"

"I'm tired and can't go on."

"We are getting nearer, patience; I promise you will forget all the pain once we arrive…"

She said with a broken weak voice:

"But I'm blind now, what am I going to see? I can't move, I'm paralyzed, mobilized, I'm stocked here in the nothingness…"

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  1. I believe that you are trying to say that motivation will eventually ebb after a long series of devastating setbacks.

    We must taste joy every once in a while, or we will tend to lose our enthusiasm.


  2. boring

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