PLZ HELP! I made this video of my kids for my father in law and my daddy, do I need to make any changes?

Question

They live out of state, so I made this for them, so they could feel closer to the kids. Please, if you have any suggestions I would appreciate it. If the video is pixelated its just from the server, I am putting the movie on a dvd it will not look like that. It has music on the video as well.

Thanks for replies!

Video for grandpas

http://www.mydeo.com/videorequest.asp?XID=1792&CID=214636

Answer 1

Any grandpa would be proud to see that

Answer 2

You brought tears to my eyes.  That was beautiful.  I love the sweet, touching words in the beginning followed by all the pictures.  I didn't see the end because of server problems but it would be awesome to have a family portrait at the end of all of you guys.  Just a thought.  Either way, that is something they will treasure forever.  

Answer 3

send it to them and while or at it send me a copy. :)

Answer 4

If I were your father or father -in-law and I received that CD it would bring tears of joy to my eyes (it did and I am not even family)          

it was very well done now you look after those two kids of yours

Answer 5

Beautiful babies, but the video was a bit sad. The music made it kinda sobering almost like a memorial video.

I would try music more kid like funner a little more playful.

Answer 6

Very nicely done.