PLZ rate for me?

Question

i like creating little poems plz rate for me

"ill punch him up

hit him in da face

make him bleed

with no grace"

"u gonna fall when we brawl inside them school walls while those halls making calls for u to go lay in bed all covered in red"

"i'll hit u with my right jab

make u bleed at the mouth

then i switch to the south

and uppercut your jaw

make u fall while u bawl

on the ground with a no sound"

Answer 1

It's not bad, I give it a 9.

Keep Practicing though.

Answer 2

rate you 1-10

ill give you a .5 mate.

Answer 3

hmmmmm utter garbage, poetry is all about flair

I reccomend beat poetry for you, It's nice and easy

Answer 4

-100

Answer 5

shite