PLease help me with resume and cover letter

Question

hello everyone i need help with this please help me add or make this better

Though I might not have the length experience as some of the other candidates I feel I am most passionate about this position. Also If you give me this oppurites I know I can contribute

Answer 1

First of all, I very interested in the possibility of working for THE COMPANY NAME as a POSITION YOU SEEK. I believe that my contribution, in collaboration with your staff, will be useful to your company.

Here include a paragraph explaining your qualifications. If you have little experience, then just highlight your skills. Maybe if you volunteered you can say, "Volunteering for X COMPANY allowed me to cooperate with others and see the product of our hard work. I presented ideas..." or something like that.

Here include a paragraph on what you can offer to their company.

Finally, include a closing like: "I have included my resumé for your evaluation and I look forward to meeting with you in the near future. I can be reached at [phone]. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Now in your resume, use many action verbs that describe your previous work. Again, if you have little experience, highlight any volunteer work you have done.

Good luck :)

Answer 2

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