POEM:Can you guess what this haiku is about?

Question

Exhausted bright star

Entranced I'm drawn into your

Mystical black spell.

©8/14/08

Best answer gets 10 Pt's or more.(If you get thumbs up)

Is it a good haiku?

Answer 1

I'm going to wager that you're writing about a black hole and its tremendous gravitational pull.  It's a good haiku, perhaps inflated in the second line, a little emotionally imprecise.  Still, enjoyable to read.

Answer 2

I will say it's a star gone nova after burning out. (possibly producing a black hole)

I don't know enough about haiku to critique one.

Answer 3

Is it a Black Hole in space? Sci-faiku!

Answer 4

I really liked this!!! 11/10!!!!

Answer 5

Wow! This poem is really good. I like it.

OK I'm gonna take a stab and say it's about a person who has like an energetic personality yet is worn out all the time? I really don't have any idea. Sorry if it's completely wrong.  

Answer 6

it's a really good haiku. :) and i'm going with 'black hole.'

i like that your words are capable of at least dual meanings. could be scifaiku, on a celestial level, or could be human interpersonal, someone drawn to a damaged someone else, or could mean another thing altogether. :)

Answer 7

An Eclipse?

Cheers!