POETRY: tell me what you think, and if this is really free verse...

Question

when does man find interest? often questions come up how..you see i find that there is a relationship between the eyes and the mind, strange and quaint, but the eyes contribute to the mind's happiness by taking the most minuscule of objects--into the biggest idea ever. could be anything, but it all sums up to become energy

you see idk if this is really free verse but this is what i do, help me out poem ppl.

Answer 1

That's great....guys coming up with poetry. =]

♥ Good Luck!

Answer 2

it is free verse....

it may not be considered to be 'poem style' because it looks like a paragraph but it is surely free verse

Answer 3

i thought it was good, short, but good

Answer 4

it sounds more like a statement or a thought. It sounds more like a great quote something a president might say

Answer 5

It sounds like a free verse to me, but more of inductive logic, as if U were proving a scientific opinion. I like the way U look at (things). Some people look at the whole thing, to end up at the smallest element. Others do the opposite, and the latter takes a good observant mind , which utilizes all all those tools ( bio- Input-devices) to recognize such (particle), and then construct its linkage to other particles, int the environment of logical relativity, to reach a wholly conclusion . Does that make any sense ! I hope so.  

Answer 6

I doesnt sound too much like free verse, almost telling a story, saying a statement or inquiring about something