Part VI, nearing the end. How can I make it better?

Question

Demused-Evolution of a Poet VI

Little by little,

my darkness faded,

her light shone

in my eyes.

When I was with her,

I was beautiful.

When I was with her,

my soul had

no age,

and I wrote eternity

with her name.

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Answer 1

This is lovely.  The darkness of the soul purged by the writing of poetry and the emergent light is a thing of beauty. The poet in this series is metamorphosing, transforming, and it seems as though it is all due to the muse.  Fascinating.  Thank you.

Answer 2

Brava! beautiful series.  Thanks so much.

Answer 3

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Answer 4

I think the smallness of these poems makes it more manageable for others to read... however that may come at a price, some will give much shorter answers because they have been placed into that 'quick' funk... but this is wonderful and thrilling nonetheless....