Penny for your thought, on poem?

Question

It is called: Love

Everyone has there demise,

And dies

But not everyone feels pain,

As others

That’s why sometimes,

We do the insane

At our short stay,

We Take others pain away

Answer 1

OK don't know if love should be the name of this poem but I liked it.

Answer 2

ummmm I think you need some more editing.

first of all, why is it called "love" that doesnt make sense at all.

and also it should be "everyone has THEIR demise"

and "sometimes" and "insane" don't rhyme

and "pain" and "others" don't rhyme.

and i don't quite understand the purpose of your poem.

keep writing though! & good luck : )