Peoms ,please have a look?plz give me what you think?

Question

My friends are gone

My father never exist

My future is dark

In the past that was left

Who am I m to decide

The life I want to live

Who am I do wonder

If I will love again

I m no one in this world

I m the ash that turns to dust

When I was small I used to see

A girl with a lollypop and daddy

And I thought that’s the heaven

No matter how life got harsh

I thought I was the bad girl

That’s why I had never this

And as I grew I learned something

That loser is forever one

I want to ask you something

My daddy I never felt

Was I a spider girl?

Or filth you want to clean

Or I was your sweetie daughter

But so bad you never learn

Let’s close the album and walk

Away from everyone

In my heart there is a wonder

A tear that I never shed

Answer 1

its pretty cool

i make poems myself.

i can relate to somethings in there.

like im never happy..my firends leave me

Answer 2

Sounds like, you are too hard on yourself, trying to figure out

the whys of life. Many times the reasons are not clear.

Try not to dwell on the why, take each day as it comes and

live it to the best of your ability, that is all life asks of us. Get rid of the word, loser. Any body can be a winner, it is an

attitude, happiness is within look for it there, not out side yourself. Best wishes.

Answer 3

Who shares the same air you breathe?

Who else gets brown under your sunshine?

Who drinks from the same water supply?

Who also pulls their pants on one leg at a time?

How then, are they so different?

You too can look at the stars for free and realise they are yours too.

Lift your head and be the person you want to be. If at first it seems hard, just pretend and no-one will know the difference.

One day neither will you.