Please, can you tell me what you think about this chapter? ?

Question

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Answer 1

I love that!

:-)

it's really great!

Answer 2

That's pretty good, esp. for a rough draft.

Did you write it?

Answer 3

     Yes, I think it's excellent.  There are mistakes, of course, but as noted, it's a rough draft.  I'm really not sure about the 'cleavage wall' and the 'south t*t' bit!  I'd be inclined to develop more dignified names for this part of the castle. Get onto the Net and have a look at castle architecture.  You should get some good ideas there.  Keep at it, though.  It's coming along very well.

Good luck

Mike B