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What did the G8 leaders’ wives do at the summit in japan?

-At the G8 summit, the first ladies of the leaders of the most powerful economies have abstracted a lot by public just like theirs husbands on diplomatic affairs.

- The 64 year-old Japanese leader’s wife Kiyoko Fykuda, yesterday, hosted an afternoon banquet for ladies and gentlemen on the first day at the summit. Participating in this banquet there were serveral ladies.

- Carla Bruni, a 40 year old singer and ex-model, had just married with the French president Sarkozy did not attend because she was occupied having prepared for the day of new CD’s publishing.Besides, german leader angela Merkel’s husband with the italian prime minister berlosconi’s wife were absent too.

This is the first time the russian president’s wife and the england prime minister’s wife have attended at the summit.Sunday,mrs sveltana paid a visit to a resort and hot-water stream close to toya lake and went sightseeing on it.

Mrs Sarah, 44, has come earlier to Japan than her husband. Share the most interest in giving aids to Africa with her husband, Sarah gave an Saturday lecture on necessary to prmote pregnant women heath care service in developed countries

Mrs Bush, 61, prove to be a strong experienced mother and perfect wife. This is also the last time she attends the G8 Summit before her husbands ends up his term by January next year. With friendly smile, the first lady of the U.S hleped the wives exchange one another easily. Last Sunday, she took part in the husband’s birthday party hosted by Japanese prime minister.

- At the time taking place the G8 summit, the viwes learn how to dress the kimono traditional clothing of Japanese, attend tea-banquet, take part in serveral exhibitions and saving the environment, acquire the childrens’ proposal on over the world to target to oppose the Global climate warming.

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  1. Um... the question you stated already have some grammar errors.


  2. thats good

    is it 4 summer school?

  3. if English is not your first language then its not too bad...if it is...OMG!!!  your teachers going to have a field day with his/her red pen!!!

  4. What did the G8 leaders’ wives do at the summit in Japan?

    -At the G8 summit, the first ladies of the leaders of the most powerful economies have abstracted a lot by public just like theirs husbands on diplomatic affairs.

    - The 64 year-old Japanese leader’s wife Kiyoko Fykuda, yesterday, hosted an afternoon banquet for ladies and gentlemen on the first day at the summit. Participating in this banquet there were several ladies.

    - Carla Bruni, a 40 year old singer and ex-model, had just married with the French president Sarkozy did not attend because she was occupied having prepared for the day of new CD’s publishing. Besides, German leader Angela Merkel’s husband with the Italian Prime Minister Berlusconi’s wife were absent too.

    This is the first time the Russian president’s wife and the England prime minister’s wife have attended at the summit.  Sunday, Mrs. Svetlana paid a visit to a resort and hot-water stream close to Toya Lake and went sightseeing on it.

    Mrs. Sarah, 44, has come earlier to Japan than her husband. Share the most interest in giving aids to Africa with her husband, Sarah gave an Saturday lecture on necessary to promote pregnant women heath care service in developed countries

    Mrs. Bush, 61, prove to be a strong experienced mother and perfect wife. This is also the last time she attends the G8 Summit before her husband’s ends up his term by January next year. With friendly smile, the first lady of the U.S helped the wives exchange one another easily. Last Sunday, she took part in the husband’s birthday party hosted by Japanese prime minister.

    - At the time taking place the G8 summit, the views learn how to dress the kimono traditional clothing of Japanese, attend tea-banquet, take part in several exhibitions and saving the environment, acquire the children’s’ proposal on over the world to target to oppose the Global climate warming.

    there i fixed it

  5. Please, check my english grammar errors. I thank you very much.

    What did the G8 leaders’ wives do at the summit in japan?

    -At the G8 summit, the first ladies of the leaders of the most powerful economies have  **been** abstracted a lot by public just like their** husbands on diplomatic affairs.

    - The 64 year-old Japanese leader’s wife Kiyoko Fykuda, yesterday, hosted an afternoon banquet for ladies and gentlemen on the first day at the summit. **There were several ladies participating in this banquet.**

    - Carla Bruni, a 40 year old singer and ex-model,**who**  had just married with the French president*,* Sarkozy*,* did not attend because she was occupied **by preparing** for the day of new CD’s publishing. German leader Angela Merkel’s husband and the Italian Prime Minister Berlosconi’s wife were absent too.

    This is the first time the Russian president’s wife and the England prime minister’s wife have attended at the summit. Sunday, Mrs. Sveltana paid a visit to a resort and hot-water stream close to Toya Lake and went sightseeing **there**.

    Mrs*.* Sarah, 44, **came to Japan earlier** than her husband. Shar*ing* the most interest in giving time** in order to help end** AIDs to Africa with her husband, Sarah gave an Saturday lecture on necessary to pr*o*mote pregnant women*'s* heath care service*s* in developed countries*.*

    Mrs*.* Bush, 61, prove*d* to be a strong*,* experienced mother and perfect wife. This is also the last time she attend*ed* the G8 Summit before her husband *will complete**  his term [January next year]. With *a* friendly smile, the first lady of the U.S helped the wives exchange **with** one another easily. Last Sunday, she took part in the husband [of who, insert the name into the paragraph as this is unclear]  birthday party hosted by **the** Japanese prime minister.

    - At the time taking place the G8 summit, the wives learn*ed* how to dress the kimono (traditional clothing of Japanese women), attend a tea-banquet, take part in serveral exhibitions, save the environment, **and** acquire the children's* proposal on the world to target to oppose the Global climate warming.

  6. BAD

  7. What did the G8 leaders’ wives do at the summit in japan?

    -At the G8 summit, the first ladies ( NOTE: completely take out the phrase 'of the leaders'.  Too many prepositions.) of the most powerful economies have abstracted a lot by public just like theirs husbands on diplomatic affairs.

    - The 64 year-old Japanese leader’s wife Kiyoko Fykuda, hosted an afternoon banquet for ladies and gentlemen on the first day at the summit yesterday.  Participating in this banquet there were several ladies.

    - Carla Bruni, a 40 year old singer and ex-model and just married with the French president Sarkozy, did not attend because she was occupied having prepared for the day of her new CD’s publishing.  German leader Angela Merkel’s husband and Italian prime minister Berlosconi’s wife were absent as well.

    This is the first time the Russian president’s wife and the England prime minister’s wife have attended at the summit.  Sunday, Mrs. Sveltana paid a visit to a resort and hot-water stream close to Toya Lake and went sightseeing.

    Mrs. Sarah, 44, had come earlier to Japan than her husband. Sharing the most interest in giving aid (NOTE:  AIDS is an STD which Africa is already full of.) to Africa with her husband, Sarah gave an Saturday lecture promoting pregnant women heath care service in developed countries.

    Mrs. Bush, 61, prove to be a strong, experienced mother and perfect wife.  This was also the last time she attended the G8 Summit before her husband's end of term in January next year.  With friendly smile, the first lady of the U.S helped the wives exchange one another easily.  Last Sunday, she took part in the husband’s birthday party hosted by Japanese prime minister.

    - At the time taking place the G8 summit, the wives learned how to dress the kimono traditional clothing of Japanese, attend tea-banquet, take part in several exhibitions and save the environment, acquire proposals from children across the world on how to solve Global Warming.

    Okay, I added a few notes in there.  You should read them.

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