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Question

I live in a quite small village near Olomouc called Lutín. Distance is about 9 kilometres. It has about 3000 inhabitants.

I get up before 7 o´clock and I have about 20 minuttes for to clothe something, for everyday hygiene, for to have a breakfast and for to feed my little rabbit Tereza. Meantime I have switch-on TV where there is The Breakfest with Nova. I have to know what is new and what weather is outside. I dont want to describe thees 20 minuttes because it isnt something interesting just hectic.

Because front of our house is repairing I have to walk around our house. I have 5 minuttes for to get to bus stop. So when I walk out from the house I go along the street, I am passing shop, which is at the corner, where I buy something to drink (just soft drink) and something to eat – for example a roll or a cake. When I get out I have to take the first turn to the right where there is a flower shop ( I cant recommend this shop because it is a little bit expensive) and in front of the flower shop there is the bus stop full of people waiting for the bus - mostly. My route to school by bus takes about 10 minutes. It depends how many pensioners want to go to the doctor. During I do homework or I study something. Sometimes I just look at roadscape or I speculate on immortality of maybeetle. I also can realize my everyday route to school by bicycle – the distance isn’t so long but there is a problem with the shower and changing clothes.When I arrive to Olomouc Fakultni nemocnice station I go along the Heyrovskeho street, after I go underpass and when I get up I have to take the first turn to the right and I just go up towards to my hight school – Gymnazium Cajkovseho - called h**l. Not in vain people (exactly students) say that something isnt so horrible like the route to school.

Answer 1

I am guessing you want your English essay corrected? Yes? Here is my correction with corrected use of the english language(American style)

I get up before 7 o´clock and I have about 20 minutes to dress, shower,have breakfast and to feed my little rabbit Tereza. Meantime I  switch on my TV where there is The Breakfast with Nova. I have to know what is new and what the weather is like outside. I dont want to describe these 20 minutes because it isn't something interesting just hectic.

The front of our house is being repaired so I have to walk around our house. I have 5 minutes to get to the bus stop. When I walk out from the house I go along the street, I pass a shop, which is at the corner, where I buy something to drink (just a soft drink) and something to eat, for example a roll or a cake. When I get out I have to take the first turn to the right where there is a flower shop ( I cant recommend this shop because it is a little bit expensive), in front of the flower shop there is the bus stop full of people waiting for the bus, mostly. My route to school by bus takes about 10 minutes. It depends how many pensioners want to go to the doctor. During the ride I do homework or I study something. Sometimes I just look at roadscape or I speculate on immortality of the maybeetle. I also can change my everyday route to school by riding my bicycle – the distance isn’t so long but there is a problem with the shower and changing clothes.When I arrive to Olomouc Fakultni nemocnice station I go along the Heyrovskeho street, after I go under the underpass I get up I have to take the first turn to the right and I just go straight to my hight school – Gymnazium Cajkovseho - called h**l. Not in vain people (students) say that something isn't so horrible like the route to school.

Answer 2

OK, I'm assuming you don't speak English very well.  And if you do, your essay is really, really bad.  Spelling, punctuation, and grammar are terrible.  And it doesn't make an ounce of sense.  But if you're new to English, it's great!  ; )

Answer 3

needs more tought

Answer 4

I would assume you don't speak English very well...there are a lot of spelling, grammar, and punctuation mistakes in this essay.