Please A Moi Read my poem?

Question

Be Inspired 2 Dance, Dance to Inspire

Dance is the art that you would notice in a crowd,

The divine motion that overlooks the motion of the Earth.

The poem without the need for any words,

The heart and soul of all creativity.

Every true dancer has their own unique imagination and beautiful difference,

Dancing like no-body is watching is to truly express your individual way of thinking and feeling.

The way the air steps aside to let a dancer move shows the true brilliance of dance alone,

Dancing is a shortcut to much deserved happiness for only those who choose to portray it in the correct way.

Inspire others to be the wind from the heavens, the waves from the ocean and the wings from the angels,

Dance goes without disrupting the rest of the world but by gliding and floating within it.

Dance is a way to escape, to inspire and to express,

A flowing river of energy, enthusiasm, movement and adoration.

Dance

Answer 1

nice poem you got there. to bad i dont dance.

Answer 2

8/10

too many big words, simpler audiences might not get them.

other than that, very good

Answer 3

i read the sun. you know sometimes it's better to admire someones ignorance then insult their intelligence,

Answer 4

f your poem b8tch

you wanted people to say wat they thnk about ur poem so dont od on them

and plus your poem snt that great

Answer 5

Prose with chopped-up lines, limp words and not a single poetic device or interesting idea from beginning to end.

Answer 6

It's really poetic, creative, insipiring, expressive, beautiful... makes you wanna' dance (darn, i can only clog) it's really good, it has a lot of descripitive language adjectives that seem so fit to be in those places you picked for them. Great job!

Answer 7

i do street dancing and this poem relates to it soo much, and i love it!

good job ;)