Please Critique my poem

Question

Red Means Stop But Don't Slow Down

Moving quickly. Faster, better.

Drive with me, let's go together.

Speed through streets in dreary straits.

Stop sign's coming. Please don't wait.

Red means stop but don't slow down.

I need escape from small life towns.

I'm happy here. Let's keep on going.

Hope you're happy. 'Cause we're not slowing.

Stoplights coming far ahead.

Stoplights changing, green to red.

Red means stop but don't slow down.

Let's get outta here before we drown.

I love you now. You know that right?

Let's get married. Soon, tonight.

Red lights flashing far behind.

Red and blue while sirens whine.

Red means stop but don't slow down.

Tonight you'll wear a wedding gown.

Answer 1

.....Wow.....i'm crying....it's just that horrible.

Answer 2

the beginig is a part of haste then near the end it talks aboutlove. i like that about ur poem. maybe u can help me with my poems sometime. jk. i like poetry

Answer 3

pretty&adventurous...inspirational! lovee itthh

Answer 4

i love this poem! its really thoughtfull and meaningful.