Ok so my teacher underlined these sentances that he thought were odd, can u please fix them for me?
He said this is a fragment sentance, also this sentance is talking about my house after a hurricane hit it.
My home is in pieces right in front of my eyes, wood splintering my fingers as i try and make whats left of this memorable home.
I have no clue why this is wrong:
Sometimes I dream at night of living a life were I can make good money to have a nice and comfortable home, warm and delicious food on the table, and happiness on everyone's faces.
Finally this sentence im writing a fake goodbye letter so im telling my friend chanel that america is better than russia so this is my topic thingy.
America is much better than here Chanel, you really need to understand that.
This has nothing to do with me its for us history about immigration, i did not loose my home nor and i from russia LMAO ok just wnted to get that clear. Thanks :p
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