Please Help me find wrong words / wrong sentences structure in the quesstions.?

Question

Hello, can you help find wrong sentences and wrong words plz.?

1. If this month we have excessed quantity orders, and our inventory level is low then t will insufficient stock provide to our customers. We must replenish our stock immediately and request our suppliers send us their stock ASAP, at the same time, we also will inquire other suppliers about their stock level whether they can send us their stock right now.

2.We selected these two methods because both of them are have different advantages

3.We will find out our target customers from our database, and then we will introduce our new products and follow up to them.

4.Our customers will introduce their friends or someppls for us.

5.We will take action to contact our new target customers, let them know we have new products.

6.We will provide a one-week of five modules’s training course to teach them.

7.We need to know our target market’s trend for future development. Measure this market whether

Answer 1

1. We must replenish our stock immediately and request our suppliers send us their stock ASAP, at the same time, we also will inquire other suppliers about their stock level whether they can send us their stock right now.

         * There should be a semicolon after the ASAP, not a comma.

2. We selected these two methods because both of them are have different advantages.

         * Take the are out after them.

3. We will find our target customers from our database, and then we will introduce our new products and follow up to them.

         * Take out the and after the comma.

4. Our customers will introduce their freinds of some people for us.

          * The for should be a to.

5. We will take action to contact our new target customers, let them know we have new products.

          * There should be a semicolon instead of a comma after customers; or add an and before let.

6. We will provide a one-week five modules's training course to teach them.

          * The modules's should be only modules.

7. We need to know our target market's trend for future development. Meausure this market whether.

          * Change whether to weather.