Please Rate/Fix My Yubel Deck?

Question

Monsters – 20

Yubel – The Ultimate Nightmare

Yubel – Terror Incarnate X2

Yubel X3

Armageddon Knight X3

Doom Shaman X2

Dark Grepher

Mystic Tomato X2

Van’Dalgyon The Dark Dragon Lord X2

Asura Priest X2

Spirit Reaper

Snipe Hunter

Spells – 11

Swing of Memories X3

Reinforcement of the Army X2

Giant Trunade

Brain Control

Mystical Space Typhoon

Heavy Storm

Lightening Vortex

Premature Burial

Traps – 9

Dark Illusion X2

Destruction Jammer X2

Magic Jammer X2

Bottomless Trap Hole X2

Torrential Tribute

Answer 1

my big bro uses a field card called Yami for his dark monster, i hate it.... welll u should put it too.

Answer 2

you need to speed it up with special summons, add in reasonings, fires of doomsday

you have to many swing of memories, since you only have 2 geminis use 1 or 2 swing of memories.

Answer 3

get caius the shadow monarch and see if that helps