Please Rate/Fix new Macro Cosmos Deck??

Question

This is a deck I'm helping my friend make that heavily involves removing cards from play similar to my own Macro Monarch Deck. We plan on going to the Regionals eventually and I already know my deck is up to snuff, now I wanna make sure he can take it too.

Total Cards: 45

Monster: 21x

Banisher of the Radiance [3]

Caius the Shadow Monarch [2]

Cyber Valley [2]

D.D. Assailant [1]

D.D. Scout Plane [1]

D.D. Survivor [3]

D.D. Warrior [2]

D.D. Warrior Lady [1]

Dark Magician of Chaos [1]

Exiled Force [1]

Golden Homunculus [2]

Gren Maju Da Eiza [2]

Spell: 14x

Brain Control [1]

D.D.R. - Different Dimension Reincarnation [3]

Dimensional Fissure [2]

Gravekeeper's Servant [2]

Lightning Vortex [1]

Mystical Space Typhoon [1]

Reinforcement of the Army [2]

Soul Absorption [2]

Trap: 10x

Bottomless Trap Hole [2]

Divine Wrath [1]

Dust Tornado [1]

Macro Cosmos [3]

Return from the Different Dimension [1]

Sakuretsu Armor [1]

Torrential Tribute [1]

Answer 1

8/10. I hate these decks, because these were the only ones that would beat my dragon deck. They are really good though. Good luck @ regionals!!!!! C.t.