Please Rate my Pimple Poem?

Question

The Pimple Poem

Oh dear annoying pimple,

you have crushed once again my ugly face

why do you must add up my prettiness in the fog?

now I should never eat my favorite greasy peanuts

you have crushed out my confidence

why must I suffer this ruthless pain?

and let you and puberty laugh maniacally?

late night tv shows are no longer watched

for you take them away from me

like a spoiled little brat,wanting his lolly back

someday my evil friend

I soon be getting the last laugh

for I shall earn my way to have the pimple removal

for this 8 dollar of would soon be growing

and ALAS!!! you shall be gone forever

my dear annoying pimple

surrender now or I shall smite you with my facial cleanser!!

Answer 1

My dear, dear Bash, that was quite the masterpiece!

Answer 2

soz 3

Answer 3

Sorry, it is so repulsive I couldn't pass the first stanza.

What on earth happened to poems of love, humanity and beauty??

Answer 4

if i wrote a poem for every pimple on my face, my keyboard would probably be broken by  now

lol, good job

Answer 5

That is good for something so annoying.

Answer 6

I can't stop laughing... OMG, now I have stiches.. HA HA HA HA !!!!!

Answer 7

lol.This is beyond funny.Don't mind mean pimple.lol

Answer 8

lol

Thats good :-)

Well done you !

Answer 9

hahahhaha lol,i cant stop.

but it really is nice of u to try this anyways