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Please Rate my poem.... Gothic Tiger?

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little gothic tiger

sits in a lonely corner

pondering on the horrible memories

that consumes her mind

wondering why the rapes had to happen

wondering why her parents abused her

why so many people she knew had to hurt her

All these memories wont fade away

somehow a part of her soul

a part of her being...has been ripped out of her

Yet this gothic tiger sits in that lonely corner

wanting to cut once more.... to feel relief

but she made a promise to her best friend

she would stop it and become happy

yet today this gothic tiger feels the numbness coming back

and dont know how to talk to him

while he himself is upset... lost in his thinking.

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since all you want is a rating.... 8/10
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On a scale from 1 to 10 i'd give it a 8
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wow i really liked it. i would give this an 8 or a 9. interesting poem
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one word...DEPRESSING
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its kinda depressing
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you need to see a psychologist if you were sexually abused. i was and believe me it carries with you your whole life and you'll never have a normal relationship.
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This is bloody fantastic! You have a rare talent. Oh my, this is just so evocative!
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