Please Rate this yugioh deck minus the fan bans thats in it.?

Question

The first time I put this on here I think some of who looked at this might got a bit confuse.This deck isn't just a lot of randoms.It really is a pretty good deck, I can't say its the best cause theres always someone better.Deck is ritual / dark world cards.Theres a lot of strategies within this deck.

Fusion: Thousand Eyes Restrict

Monsters:

Sagan

Wall Of Illusion

3xManju Of The Ten Thousand Hands

Stealth Bird

Dark Master Zorc

Sillva, Warlord of Dark World

Morphing Jar#2(thinking of a replacement)

2xRelinquished

Beiige, Vanguard of Dark World

Goldd, Wu-Lord of Dark World

Reign-Beaux, Overlord of Dark World

Break The Magical Warrior

Ruin, Queen Of Oblivion

The WIcked Dreadroot (for fun)

3xVampire Ladies

Traps:

Gravity Bind

Call Of the Haunted

Waboku

Magical Cylinder

2xDust Tornados

2xCompulsory Evaculation Devices

Buttomless Trap Hole

Robbin Goblin

Magic:

Mystical Space Typhoon

Mystic Plasma Zone

2xBlack Illusion Rituals

Lighting Vortex

Nobleman Crossout

Contract of the dark master

Answer 1

its ok 6/10

i know dark worlds need discarding so you might want to add a couple cheerful coffins

vampire lady isn't good anymore because now people like getting cards into their graveyard ex. treeborn frog, mask of darkness, magical stone excavation or magician of faith (banned)

rituals aren't considered that good because you can't play them right away but if you want to keep that theme then you might want to add that other monster that takes rituals i think its called sonic bird

some of your spells and traps aren't that good

-2 dust tornados +heavy storm +magic drain

gravity bind is a great combo with relinquished but it gets in the way of most of your other cards. switch with swords of revealing light

-2 compulsory -robbin goblin +cards that will destroy your opponent's field ex sakuretsu armor, mirror force, trap hole

fix the above and post it again

u should switch to playing advanced format. u can't enter tournaments in traditional and not many of your cards are forbidden anyway

thousand eyes

call of the haunted (switch with monster reborn which is actually NOT forbidden)

breaker the magical warrior (switch with any other good ATK card)