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Please Read Poem.?

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My Life Is A Butterfly:

I flow free, free and free

I soar beyond perimeters

I sit upon leaves and cast a glow

I glide to and fro as happy as can be

I seep into meadows and paint the skies

I am me and you are you and My Life Is A Butterfly.

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  1. i like it =]


  2. the lines contain a really wonderful poem.  if you would like a professional critique, let me know.  i see great potential.

  3. Your poem is very beautiful.

    The only correction I would suggest is for you to change the second word.

    Instead of 'flow', I think that if you substituted the word 'fly' it would improve it.

    But it is a very lovely poem.   Keep writing!

  4. its good
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