Please Read Poem!?

Question

My Blue Moon Sky:

My blue moon sky

I shift in presence and leap upon

I walk a dazed and walk in pace

I sit upon and gaze and gaze

Just to see my blue moon sky.

Answer 1

yup, thats poetry all right, i know cuz it is boring, puts me to sleep, and doesnt make any sense.

Answer 2

Thats cool!

i like it ...

Answer 3

it's nice

Answer 4

I like it. Just "blue moon sky" paints a vivid picture for me where there are no clouds or stars, just a big full moon. Great job!

Answer 5

:)

Answer 6

wow, it painted a very pretty picture in my head ur pretty good! :- ]

Answer 7

I HATE POETRY

Answer 8

it's not really my type, but i love writing poetry and i respect anyone else who shares that with me.

Answer 9

ohh i like tht!!!!! thts real good!!!

Answer 10

Nice, I love the second line, very expressive. Good job. Keep 'em coming.

Answer 11

Thats really good. it makes me relaxed and calm.

Answer 12

very good luved it

a STAR FOR YOU!!!:)

Answer 13

It makes me feel calm and happy :)

Answer 14

wow... thats a nice poem...

it deeply instills a feeling of serenity and paints a vivid mental picture of a cloudless night when one just stares at the moon's aura. Really nice.

Answer 15

Thats lovely

You should get your own blog page, some people use them to list their creative writing on :)

Answer 16

perfect perfect perfect

Answer 17

I really like that. Very witty. Nice job.

Answer 18

it's short, but it means so much.

it makes me feel like it's midnite, the moon is high in the sky, and there are blankets of snow covering the ground.

but that's my interpetation.

excellent job!

please do keep writing.

Answer 19

yes

Answer 20

I saw it,

I read it

I left it.

Please don't give up your day job just yet.  You need a bit more practice.

Answer 21

thats really awesome. keep writting and doing what you do!

Answer 22

ok

Answer 23

its good but needs more work.. :)

Answer 24

Nice and concise, I like the rhyme scheme, 8/10

Answer 25

It was really good. Nice free verse poem!

Answer 26

mmmeeeellllooowwww.

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its nice.

Answer 27

Thats a nice poem.Lol I write them too.