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Question

Tell me when will man conquer over beast

the beast of coach and burberry seems to mighty

the fake smile always fools the young and the meek

but when will it i ask

when man will realize that the beast is as fake as her prada

i see past her eyeliner and into her eyes

i see fear

i see past her glossed lips

and her words that cut like glass

my wounds will heal

i will leave this battle of babes and b*****s

proud

knowing who is the true beast

for i know it is not me

Answer 1

take out the cursing...and kinda confusing!!

Answer 2

i think it is a little confusing

Answer 3

is it about love? i don't get it but it sounded intense

Answer 4

kinda weird...haha in a good wayy!!

how about mineee?

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Answer 5

omg  love it one of the best poems of my top 15 ur #  3 cuz it cool u no u should consider poem school ur goood u got some talent !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...