Please advise on this new poem I wrote?

Question

Bested Buddy

Farewell my school days pal

Hangin wit you twas a hurtin' howl

Days of funnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn <[n key sticking w/juice]

Laughter in the sun

Hitting the halls

-N- slappin' anutters buns

Slamming da lockers

Tripping wit nicker bockers

And

When we was kids we played in the muddy

You was poor wit clothes all real cruddy

But you was, and is still my bested buddy

Answer 1

pretty cool....

skool ole days are gone

they fade away with time

all that is left

is a towel on my top...

and black print on my azz

those days have passed...

Answer 2

really good :p

Answer 3

word son

lolol

Answer 4

it could use the &quot;n&quot; word

Answer 5

yeah yeah its fine.

Answer 6

nice!