Please... any thoughts about this poem?

Question

There is a film festival in France...

Parading down a street with

banners and red carpets...

Underpassing the overpass...

Beneath awnings...

Through passageways...

Making the trip to the destination,

a bit more interesting...

a bit more dense...

& a bit harder to get to...

In a sense,

it becomes part of the destination...

In a sense,

you are there for IT...

In a sense,

it is your imagination...

Answer 1

cool

Answer 2

I see it as accounting for the internal and external observations with short accurate words to provide the description.

I like the way the person is an observer of himself as an observer and of the circumstance, situatuion, and self-participation.

It places me there at the Festival. I can see it through your eyes.

Answer 3

I sense a little of hopelessness and longingness in this poem.

I think someone needs a friend to talk with or to be with.

Cheer up, Buddy!

nonoyM

Phils

Answer 4

I really like it in an abstract way. It seems very in the moment, like real thoughts or ideas.

I like stream of consciousness work in general though :)