for english homework we are ment to create a short story based on the peom 'funeral blues'. here is the poem:
Stop ll the clocks, cut off the telephone,
prevent the dog from barking with a juicy bone,
silence the pianos with a muffled drum,
bring out the coffin, let the mourners come.
let aeroplanes circle moaning overhead,
scribbling on the skiy the message He is dead
put crepe bows around the white necks of public doves,
let traffic policemen wear black cotton gloves.
he was my nother, my south, my east and west,
my working week and my sunday rest,
my moon, my mid night, my talk, my song;
i thought that love would last forever: i was wrong.
the stars are not wanted now; put out everyone,
pack up the moon and dismantle the sun,
pour away the ocean and sweep up the woods;
for nothing now can come to any good.
(sorry if theres any spelling mistakes)
any way, this is my short story
i havnt done the last paragraph which i am going to base on the last verse, because i cant think of what to write.
so please help (:
Silence lurked in the atmosphere like an unwanted smell. It was almost as if time stood still the morning that the residents found out that He was dead. Conversation stopped. No sound came from the village - his death seemed to have affected everyone and everything. The deep bark of a local dog, faded in to a light whimper. Even the aeroplane seemed to grieve as it moaned up above, looking down at small groups of silent mourners slowly making their way to the graveside. On their way they passed the friendly, old police man, who greeted them as usual with a nod, but that still sadly had lost its usual cheery manner.
The coffin gradually made its way out, and was eventually surrounded by all his friends and family, who where trying to keep in mind the memories they treasure of him. A low voice echoed around the crowed space. Explaining her aching heart, ‘He was my North, my South, my East and West’ she clarified. He was her everything. But he was gone.
we're asked to keep the mood of the poem, have i kept it?
thank you for your time and help (:
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