Please check my deck rate 1 -10 and tell me what i need to fix ?

Question

Monsters x20

GIant Orc x1

Herald of Craetion x1

GILFORD The LIGHTING x1

Shining Abyss x1

The Creator x1

Guarian Angel Joan x1

CHIRON The Mage x1

TYRANT DRAGON x1

The Wicked Eraser x1

Raging flame Sprite x1

GYROID x1

SUBMARINEROID x1

EXILED FOURCE x1

HOMUCULUS THE Alchemic BEing x1

MATAZA THE ZAPPER x1

LITTLE-WINGUARD x1

CYBER- TECH ALLIGATOR x1

MAGNA-SLASH DRAGON x1

ELEMENTAL Hero WILDHEART x1

KAISER Sea HOURSE x1

Spells x11

SMASING GROUND x1

BIG BANG SHOT x1

THE SHALLOW GRAVE X1

BANNER OF COURGE X1

LIGHTING VORTEX X1

RUSH RECKLESSLY X1

BRAIN CONTROL X1

SOUL EXCHANGE X1

MAUSOLUM OF THE EMPEROR X1

GUARD PENALTY X1

MEGAMORPH X1

EKIBYO DRAKMORD X1

TRAPS X9

MAGIC JAMMER X1

DUST TORNADO X1

MAGIC CYLINDER X2

SHADOW SPELL X1

NEGATE ATTACK X1

RISING ENERGY X1

COMPULSORY EVATION DEVICE X1

FUN-RIN-KA-ZAN X1

LEAVE COMMETS AND TELL ME WHAT TO FIX THIS DECK MADE MY TOURMENT RECORD 67 - 13 AND I AM ONLY 12 JUST HELP ME OUT RATE MY DECK 1-10

Answer 1

i am sorry to say your deckis not going ot make the cut... the only beatdown stile decks these days are monarchs! so your deck is quite out of date for it's deck type! to improve upon it try useing cards that will help u alittel more here is a combo that a beastdown stile deck should use (masolium of the emperor+any 2400 attack or more 6 or 5 star monster+mystic wolk this combo works like this: summon monster and pay 1000 then when your opponent kills it chain mystic wolk and you gain teh 1000 back and more! another thing is the deck is very slow! try useing cvards to make u draw more or ate least fill it with monster that wil serch teh deck for other cards: mystic tomato., giant germ, giant rat etc) if you have lots of tese you will have pleaty to use as tribute and have cards that are there but accualy not if u get it! also u have too many cards that require 2 monster as tribute to summon. replace all of them with monarchs! as for the spells and traps use please follow the theam if ur using big monsters use traps and spells to gard ur back or help with summoning them... a trick i loved back when i still use this format is using a hero emerges and have only big monsters in hand so they can only summon the powerful cards that will take them out next turn! a different combo i loved when i played that format was soul exchange to summon my heavy hitters. i use 2 of them at once adn only lose 1 battel phase for summoning a brain crusher. one thin you should try is to stack your deck with these mini combos and even if you dont hav awesome cards your deck wont be all that bad!

Answer 2

take out Rush Recklessly and Megamorph and

put in a black pendent and a malevalent nuzzler otherwise

9.8 out of 10

Answer 3

not being mean but....its around 5/10. from the looks of it, its just a plain rise of the dragon lords structure deck edited. 1 tip: get original

Answer 4

u need more cards of good cards if u know what i mean. its too broad... focus ur deck a bit its not like every card in the world is limited... the only card that u have 2 of is magic cylinder which is ACTUALLY limited. haha so ironic... id say only a 4/10

Answer 5

Can you say randomness?

Because that's a word that describes your deck all too well.

Keyword: THEME

-The central idea of something

       -Helps your deck get the right cards when it needs them

       -Without one, your deck usually draws bad cards

For example, Magna-Slash only works if you have Banner of Courage.

Wicked Eraser only works if your deck actually has enough tributes to support it. Since your deck already has about 8-10 tributes, Wicked Eraser would have trouble getting out and doing better than the cards you tributed for it.

Answer 6

6/10

Remove:

Giant Orc (One attack only)

The Wicked Eraser (?)

Raging flame Sprite(Why do you need this?)

Gyroid(Use Decoy Dragon)

Submarineroid(AHH!)

Exiled Force(Its too broken)

Homuculus the Alchemic Being(Why do you need to change attribute?)

Matazat the Zapper(Low double attack)

Little-Winguard(????Weak????)

Cyber- Tech Alligator(Yeah right)

Magna-Slash Dragon(hmm.......)

Ekibyo Drakmord(Stops attacks! wow! You already have shadow spell)

Complusory Evation Device(You don't need to evade)

Fun-Rin-Ka-Zan(Too hard too play)

Add:

Trade-In (Draw engine)

Blue-eyes white dragon (optional)

Monster Reborn (Best card for this deck)

Tyrant Dragon (Immune to traps)

Herald of Creation(Get the monsters you need faster)

The Creator(infinite revival)

Masked Dragon(3)(good searcher for darkblaze dragon)

Snipe Hunter(Major monster removal)

Preamature Burial(revival)

Darkblaze Dragon(Duh)

Kaiser Sea Horse(tribbute fodder)

Decoy Dragon(major dragon revival)