Please comment\add\take from my deck thaks yugioh?

Question

man eater bug 1 royal night 1banner of courage1 disarment 1 magic jammer1 dark factory of mass production 1 thunder ruler 1 gravity axe-gral 1 sakuretsu armor 1 the reliable gurdian 1 two pronged atack1 magic cylinder1 moster reincarnation1 trap hole1 draining shield1

lighting blade1negate atack1 dragonic attack1brain control1 lighting vortex1 poison of the old man1 rush recklessly1 lucky iron axe1 necklace of command1 thousand dragon1 fusion gate1 silent abys1 umbra soul1 raging earth1 smashin ground1 regenarating rose1 shadow slayer1 bountiful artemis1 cry havoc!1 dark jeroid1 poison mummy1 chiron the mage1 the dragon dwelling in the cave 1 baby dragon1 chainsaw insect1 dark blade1 elemental hero clayman1 time wizard 1 ryu-ran1 big koala1 battle footballer1 elemental hero avian1 skull mark lady bug1fire trooper1 cyber gymnast1 wall of illusion1 elemental hero bubbleman1ninja grand master sasuke1 mataza the zapper1 sea koala1celtic guardian1 hyozanryu1 blue-eyes white dragon1 thanks

Answer 1

firstly, your deck needs a type.... such as Beatdown or Fusion or Trap based...

your current deck is just a random mix of different stuff. it wont work and no one can help you unless you want a complete overhaul of your deck