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Please comment/interpret my poem 'Ogre'. It would mean alot. Thanks.?

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Ogre

It's so familiar and ancient

Strong pyramids of deterioration.

Can you read the bleeding scripture?

Follow the clues, then dig up a grave or two?

The keys collapse,

in your tender hands.

I abuse them dearly,

wait to eat the rust.

This is how I bathe,

in a bucket of vomit.

I swear, you're precious.

And not invited here.

Turn the other side.

Stare at my back.

It's what you can see.

All I have to show.

I cover you,

with a borrowed angel wing,

from a child in 1999.

I hide from an ogre,

that happens to be me..

that happens to love you.

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  1. It is confused, relatively unstructured, with faulty imagery ("strong pyramids of deterioration"  "eat the rust" "ogre that happens to be me")  gratuitous filth (" bathe in a bucket of vomit").  Mostly though, it is pointless, with a senseless attempt at some sort of message.


  2. Ummmmmm, sorta weird and gross. bathe in a bucket of vomit!?!?! that is just disgusting. and eating rust, borrowed angel wing, and why would you want to dig up a grave or two???

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