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The sheep all beat

With utter discomfort

The lulling of day

Expecting its slumber

Brushing its wings

The owl, it perches

With mild alert

And easing contempt

Slowly its eyes unlatch their doors

And the night has begun,

and within a feasting to remember.

Answer 1

Nice

Answer 2

Honestly the poem is great. I write poems myself and I can tell you that I am home. Absolutely simple to read and sophisticated  intellectually.

Answer 3

This is very powerful writing.  The last stanza is intense and graphic.  I really can sense the hunt is on for the owl, you bring me there. A very simple story made into a complex and beautiful poem.  Thank you.

Answer 4

The creases on my forehead deepened as I furrowed my eyebrows.I stared intently at the poem,and the scene seem to be playing in my head.This tells you that your description is so great!

Ahhhhhhhhh!

Answer 5

It's a poem alright...

Answer 6

Its ok...

Answer 7

Engaging

Answer 8

I thought that was really good! I wish i could write like that! you should be proud of your gift sweetie!!

Answer 9

cool poem

Answer 10

thats really good I like it :D