Please comment on my poem!!!!?

Question

Hope

Simply alone as an angel cries

Becoming empty as all her

Hope hides

Simply alone she sits by a window

Bearing wishes of death to unfold

Simply alone with out her own home

besides a story of healing worry

simply alone and simply unknown

Hope cries

Simply because she is simply alone

Hope hides hope lies hope cries does hope die?

Or does hope again try?

Thanks for reading i hope you enjoyed!!!

Answer 1

Good one !

Answer 2

The poem was nicely written; I liked the second to the last line when it turns into a question. it was a lil too depressing for me tho lol thanks for sharing it :D