Please comment on my poem!!! ^-^?

Question

What Greatness by You?

What good is music

When the darkness rolls?

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What good is a dance

When depression looms?

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What good is a song

When you know you’ve done wrong?

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What good is knowledge

When ignorance is bliss?

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Greatness is with thy music

To shatter any depth of darkness.

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Greatness is with thy dance

To sever any depressing ties.

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Greatness is with thy song

To turn from the wrong and into the honorable.

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What good is knowledge?

“The only good is knowledge, and the only evil is ignorance” ~Socrates

(this poem is copyrighted by poetry.com inc. and it's partners in the making of the audio 'Sounds of Poetry' and in the oncomming series 'Immortal Verses'.)

Answer 1

It's just okay....kind of amature.    But the theme of the poem does have potential.

Give another whack at it.

: D

Answer 2

That's cool. And thank for commenting my poem! You are a good writer. Why dont you help me with my others, if you want... go to my profile and criticize all you want to!

Answer 3

It's a bit repetitive, but otherwise good.