Please comment on my writing?

Question

I know It's juvenile.

It's meant to be.

Please be honest, and tear me apart if you have to

I've got lint between my toes

And snot all in my nose

Im just a mess

But i've got a girl who's brought me love and a few tissues

To deal with all my issues

Shes always there

I've got this thing under my eyes

Its quite massive in its size

I'm just a mess

But shes gonna kiss it anyway

Cause shes beautiful in every way

From her looks down to her her heart

From when she smiles to when she farts

Answer 1

That's.....kind of.....different?....I guess.

Answer 2

hah

yezzzz

thatis the tickit