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Question

The subterranean heat in Taiwan is abundant so the hot spring resource is abundant too. In earlier period hot spring is used for recuperation and relaxation. Nowadays it becomes multi-function combining spa, tour and holiday resorts. The quality of the spa and tour is increasing important. As science and technology progress, the internet can surmount the limitation of time and space and it is used as a tool to obtain information. This research explores the hot spring tour also developing an on-line hot spring tour information web. It collects the related data of all hot spring area in Taiwan and provides the detail information of the characteristics of hot springs, transportation and accommodation of each hot spring area of Taiwan. It also give the instruction to use hot spring in correct way . When planning a hot spring tour, you can search through internet the water color, water temperature, mineral quality, hot spring attribute, quality, curative effect. of any hot spring.

Answer 1

First thing you need to do is check your grammar. In earlier periodS - it's plural, so you have to put an 's' on the end of period.

It becomes multifunctional, not multifunction.

increasingly not increasing

The bit about the internet should be a separate paragraph, as it has nothing to do with the hot springs. You connect them up later, but when you introduce the notion of science and technology, it has to be a new paragraph.

develops, not developing.

all hot spring AREAS - again, when you use a plural you have to add the 's'

detailed information

it GIVES Instruction on HOW to use hot springs correctly.

search through THE internet TO LEARN ABOUT the water

Answer 2

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Answer 3

Taiwan’s subterranean heat is abundant and therefore its hot spring resource is plentiful too. Before the hot springs were used for recuperation and relaxation. Nowadays they have turned into multi-function spas, sightseeing locations, and tempting holiday resorts. The quality of the spa and sights is increasingly important. As science and technology progress, internet can surmount the limitation of time and space and be used as a tool to obtain information. This research explores the hot spring tour and develops an on-line hot spring tour information web. It collects the related data of all hot spring area in Taiwan and provides the detail information of the characteristics of hot springs, transportation and accommodation of each hot spring area of Taiwan. It also gives the instruction to use hot springs properly . When planning a hot spring tour, you can search through internet the water color, water temperature, mineral quality, hot spring attribute, quality and the curative effect of any hot spring.

Is this supposed to be an introduction? If it is, then you have some mistakes. Don't ever use phrases like "This paper is about ..." in intros.

Answer 4

no. use spell check or yo momma

Answer 5

Please correct my essay

The subterranean heat in Taiwan is abundant so hot spring are abundant too.  In earlier times hot springs were used for recuperation and relaxation,  Now-days hot springs have become multifunctional as spas, tour, and holiday resorts.  The quality of the spa/tour is increasing in importance. The Internet can surmount the limitations of time and space and thus be used as a tool to obtain information.  This research explores the hot spring tours and develops an on line hot spring tour information web site. It collects data on all hot springs in Taiwan and provides details on all transportation and accommodations of each area of hot springs.  This site also gives instructions for using the hot spring in the correct way.  When planning a hot spring tour you can find information such as water color. temperature, quality, mineral quality and curative effect of any hot spring. This is a very detailed report for all sites.

Answer 6

start with spelling essay correctly