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Please could the community be so kind as to rate my poem? Just wrote this at work, bored. About my wife!?

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I

Me, one, myself, alone

Love

Adore, Worship, Support, Condone

You

And you, Alone.

The things, you do, for me,

They fill, my heart, with glee,

My head, it swims, to see,

the way, you look, at me!

I, Love, You!

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you truly love your wife huh. Nice of you. And your thought is so good. God bless you and your family. With loving and honing and caring truly God will always be with you.
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I, like, it.

Are you working on commission for the National Society for the Protection of Cruelty to Commas though?
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Thats cool!

I liked it, simple and. AWESOME!

I should steal it and use it as my english poem, we need to write poems for english about people. And mines not that good.

This is mine. Read it for your self.

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It's great. Can i borrow it and use it as a text message to my bloke?
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You could submit it to http://www.papertank.com and find out what many other poets think.
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