Please critique it's not too long?

Question

Is it wrong to deny what was never really there?

Refusing to see the only thing that's fair.

Tearing up every feeling that may have touched her heart

Making sure that her mind was always barred.

Still selfishly searching in vain.

Holding onto the ribbons like thorns.

She's become numb to that pain

It was my mistake to give up on truth.

Why are you giving into a premature truce?

Losing to yourself for the last time it seems.

Honesty was always there to small to ever be perceived

Tainted by their sins.

To pure to ever stay white.

Even god refused to save it.

One day it will shine just as bright.

Be brave little girl you saved yourself once more tonight.

I like ranting since I am a ranter myself! So please go for it!

Answer 1

I like it, I really do. IMO, you were able to maintain a fair usage of metaphors and symbols without "overdoing it". You definitely have a talent there! The words and flow seemed very original and natural, good job!