Please critique my poem called "Step-Daddy Dearest"?

Question

Step-daddy dearest,

I know you love me so,

You call me daughter,

To parks we like to go.

Step-daddy dearest,

I know you love me so,

That is why you only touch me,

When Momma isn't home.

Step-daddy dearest,

I know you love me so,

You tell me you won't hurt me,

But to keep my mouth closed.

Step-daddy dearest,

I know you love me so,

Please tell me,

Step-daddy dearest,

Where did you go?

Answer 1

ouch. it is pretty good. I hate those poems that sound like a greeting card. Keep it up.

Answer 2

That's brilliant.

It's weird, cause I've never read anything where the little girl loves the abuser. I like the perspective. It's kind of sickeningly creepy.