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Question

how does this sound?

can you make this more fluent and better?

There are many things i learned about ----name---. She likes to listen to country music and wants to become a dancer. She has 13 bestfriends ant two dogs. She been to Africa and her favorite color is yellow. She loves seafood, but not chinese food. She's not part indian, but part persian. She this is what I learned about Hannah.

Answer 1

*best friends = 2 words

* Chinese food

*Indian

*Persian

And your last sentence needs something, she this is what I learned about Hannah doesnt make sense. Cut out the she or change the sentence

Answer 2

The other answer is right. Also,

CHANGE:

She has 13 best friends ant two dogs. She been to Africa and her favorite color is yellow.

To:

She has 13 best friends and two dogs. She  has been to Africa and her favorite color is yellow.

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Also

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CHANGE:

She this is what I learned about Hannah.

TO:

This is what I learned about Hannah.